Response about PR

    I think my peer review partner did nice job of evenly distributing comments that showed good things about my paper and things I needed to change. He really focused on the fact that I need to ask more questions to each of the women and that my conclusion needs to be longer. I definitely agree with him about the conclusion. It is very short and is lacking what a normal conclusion has (like some sort of summary). I'm not sure if he noticed the appendix, located at the end of my paper, because that shows the other questions I asked the women.  But I do plan on asking them all maybe one or two more so I can add to the language section. Overall, his comments were helpful and thank goodness he found some of the typos that I had previously missed while reading.